Re-drafts and changes from our original storyboard

Here is a list of changes which we decided to change after audience feedback and doing further research into the noir genre.

Opening point has changed so that we include a low angle shot of the tower-block. Then we include a wide shot of the church.

The shots of the news story on the girl’s phone will be replaced so that the information is told through a news broadcast. 

We decided to keep the secondary character’s identity a secret throughout the whole opening rather than having him reveal himself a short way through the opening. This will be done through clever camera shots and angles.

We also decided to make our secondary character a bit more interesting by giving him a quirky mannerism.

Our secondary character was originally going to be wearing a hoodie to conceal his identity, however, now, he will be wearing a sharp suit and we will conceal his identity with clever camera angles. 

We decided to change the hoodie to a suit to go in line with noir conventions. He is a criminal investigator

              

We also went on Pinterest to see different noir suits and different styles.